You left me to endure alone,
The only love I’d ever known.
You enticed me, pulled me astray,
Tore out my soul, left it to fray.
I am withering on my own.
There is no fire and no brimstone.
There’s just a world of monotone.
Void of color, my skies are gray.
…You left me…
Adrift within the great unknown,
My senses deadened to the bone.
You are a thief; I was your prey.
You stole my heart and went away,
A bandit with a core of stone.
…You left me…
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Your poetry and images are so powerful. Very impressive!
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Your support is everything to me. LOVE
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You just so poetically described my post today – but mine, with the same exact meaning and story behind yours, was filled with far more chaos and lacking the beauty that yours possess. I think I wrote during a brief moment of anger and chaos. Not the best time to write. π (((((hugs))))). β€ Kimberly
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I think there’s a great deal of beauty in chaos. My writing is usually very controlled & deliberate. I lose my voice when anger & chaos are in control. The times I do manage to write in that mindset, it is absolutely cathartic. I’d like to do it more. Kudos to you for taking an inopportune moment and creating art from it. xoxo
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You know Carrie…this could be a song. I hear music when I read these words.
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You may just be on to something. It took me a couple of days but I was finally able to put a tune to the words. Now I just need my husband to make it better & add some guitar. π
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Cool! I’d love to hear it when it’s done. Since I’m sporadically following blogs right now, maybe you could email me the link at info@LauraMacky.com when it’s done? I would appreciate it if you could do that for me. I’m excited!
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You got it! I’m a novice songwriter at most so it may take a couple of weeks. π
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No worries….I’m not going anywhere. Looking forward to it!
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Reblogged this on mihran Kalaydjian and commented:
You Left Me
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My brother! I was doing some tag & category cleanup and I noticed that I had not commented on your reblog! I don’t know how that happened. I am deeply sorry for the oversight. I always appreciate your shares. You bring new and interesting readers each time you do so. Thank you for making this my new #1 post!
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My love – I miss you deeply – Every word makes me smile – here is my latest clip singing to you:)
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My most talented brother! I am finally back from a long winter break. Wishing you much success in the new year!
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Hello Carrie! Beautiful poem so full of emotion. Your words will haunt me for a while.
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Thank you, Vashti! I think we’ve all had that person in our lives that we thought would be there forever. When they walk away, everything just fades to gray. Fortunately, life marches on, and the color returns one day. π
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True. And beautifully said.
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Thank you Vashti! I hope you had the happiest of holidays!
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Love the picture and the writing.
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Why thank you! I never know when I’m running around capturing random shots what one of them might inspire.
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