I attempt
To hold a moment
Fixed in time,
But it slips
Like the sands of an hourglass
Through helpless fingers.
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Carrie Mayhem
The chaos in Carrie's brain wrapped in a neat bow presented to you in the form of poetry, photography, short stories, and other various means of controlled havoc.
I really like this post . Very well written. Time well spent.
Keep writing 🙂 🙂
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Thank you so much! Wonderful comments like these keep my pen moving! 🙂
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As a guy with a terrible memory this resonates with me.
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You and me both! I really should write down what I’m looking for before I go into the other room and forget why I’m there.
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Geez! Are you my twin? I can’t remember 😉
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Now that’s funny! Perhaps… I’ve forgotten. 😉
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🙂
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I stare at the sands on the ground after they have fallen.
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Simple yet incredibly beautiful response. Spoken like a true artist.
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Haha. Thanks, but that’s what I actually do.
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Carrie – you have a magic in writing, makes me feel I am in Paradise!!
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You truly honor my scribbles! Thank you!! You don’t know how much your support means to me. 🙂
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Carrie – You just found a brother will always support you. I love you;)
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Awe, so sweet! And you have a sister in me. Much love!
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My sister – I will be at your side always;)
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Awesome lines, so meaningful in short.. Love it !!!
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Thank you Shameer!! It’s not always easy to convey a clear message in just a few short lines. I appreciate the reassuring feedback!
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